1) The first thig that happened in the rime of the ancient mariner is that a old sailer stopped a wedding geust and began to tell him about a ship that he was on.
2)The man sat the man on a stone and began to tell his story.
3) A storm came and an ice berg came and the ship got stuck in it.
4) Next an Aldatrross came and the storm when away.
5) The other sailers played with the bird and feed the big bird.
6) After all that the sailer telling the story sot the bird with a crossbow.
7) THE Sailers were argry with the man.
8)The sailers did not know if the killing of the bird was good or bad.
9) The sailers began to run out of water and staerted to see weird things.
10) The sailers began to thing that the killing of the bird was a good thing.
11) the last thing that happened is that the sailers hung the bird aroun the mans neck
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homework 2
Day after day,day after day,
we stopped, we did not breath,
as good as a stopped ship,
apon a still and calm ocean.
Homework
It is an ancient sailer who stopped one out of three by his long grey beard and sparking eye.
Ratburger by David walliams
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